Concrete Man
56Inspiration
I owe the idea of this saga to my friends here on Hub Pages. Thank you associates, for your stimulation. A writer never knows where the sweet inspiration will come from to weave words together and create a piece to share.
A link to each of their stories has been included. They were the ones my inspiration grew from.
Thank you friends.
Concrete Man
Lots of toads so few princes
I have kissed too many frogs
some were married already, naughty me
some loved the drink more than me
sorry for them
others loved themselves a little too much
to suit me
.
Their loss
Then one day along came a nice guy
fell hard and fast I did
for this bearded long haired braided
hippie lookin' guy
with a Harley and gently worn leather
I had never been happier in all my days
years even, my entire life
he rode in on his cement truck one day
I ran from my house
he ran from his truck
we met in the
middle
he raised me up off the ground
twirled me around
like I hadn't seen him in years not mere hours
we hugged tightly and kissed hungrily
no one else existed.
We were truly in love
it was our replay of Gone With The Wind
but in our very own lives
it was so pure, invigorating and life at its best
felt oh so right
each seeking our unclaimed passion
we were as one in our own little world
melted together as warm chocolate on ice cream.
I hadn't a care in the world
he took care of it all
he let me be me
he helped me discover who I was
I was free to come and go
a first in my life not to be controlled
by a man
he was my friend, my freedom, my lover
we loved as no other has ever loved me
he satisfied me like no one had ever tried
he was sensuous, caressing every nook and cranny
I responded in kind
knew me better than I knew myself
loved my son as his very own
I loved him more for it.
Then one day a wild storm blew through our love
pounding our love into tiny particles of dust and destroying
our very lives we so lovingly shared
releasing destruction upon us both
mistrust set in and threw up walls
made of brick and mortar
very strong and well cured
couldn't be blown apart
yet we were
blown apart by this hateful wicked storm
that destroyed our lives
and our love
and trust in one another
this storm
who blew us apart
forever!
Oh to reverse this wild storm
and blow the love back
into my life
to stay and love
forever!
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Thank you BG I am glad you enjoyed it. Just lucky I guess. Hope you get lucky in love again.
Oh what a tale. So sad in the end, exes can do that to some, almost happened to me and DD, thank god she made me see the light. I drove truck too for a time, many. Now I need to thank for for the mention, I think you are referring to me, but it is misspelled dear. Link won't work. LOL no e in ralwus, hehe, that's ok. I do hope this love returns, nice one dear. I need to check out this bohemian girl.~wink~
I am so sorry I goofed. I did fix it and checked it. Please let me know if it works for you as it did me. Sorry for the misspell. I have a bad cold or the flu or some such thing and everything is a chore. No excuse just sh.. happens.
Lovely and romantic. Gave me a smile. Thank you :)
Romantic Story. Thanks for sharing! So many men don't get it, but it sounds like your concrete man did.
So sorry for the storm you're going through, but I hope and pray it's not over and that you can get through it. A man like that is worth fighting for.
Yes he did 'get it.' The storm was too bad and broke us apart long ago. Your reaction tells me my feelings came through and I thank you so much. I wish it wasn't over but sadly it is. Your comment is very sweet.
Bohemian Girl 2 years ago
What a treat! How did you know I was pining away for my concrete man all yesterday. To be in love again...